Sunset Bed

In Other Words, sunset…

SUNSET

Sunset rolls in soft, like

Flannel sheets wafting onto

Bed, season’s cool yet

Dove-gray-blue, warm mauve pastel

Day’s fatigued, ready for sleep

18 thoughts on “Sunset Bed”

Very well penned indeed, rolls so well.

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Ennle Madresan on April 5, 2019 at 6:22 am said:

Thank you very much 🙂

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- pvcann on April 5, 2019 at 7:26 am said:
  
  Oh pleasure indeed
  
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  - Ennle Madresan on April 5, 2019 at 9:46 am said:
    
    You know, I’ve mentioned how you remind me so much of the late Paul Lenzi…I used to work extra hard some days, hoping to get a “wow” from him. He was such a superior writer with a vast vocabulary, so when he was impressed with a piece I’d written, I felt I’d reached the high bar…if only for a day. And I can see the same dynamic happening with you–you’re not easily impressed and not a cheap flatterer, so I will treasure your high marks…and keep working diligently 🙂 Though I confess that these April challenges make for a grueling schedule…I’m hardly sleeping, trying to keep up–and some of the posts are just thrown together to get something up.
    
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    - pvcann on April 5, 2019 at 9:04 pm said:
      
      Ah yes, the pressure of the rapid response. Some sites specialise in spontaneous response only, which is entertaining to say the least 🙂 Thank you for your very kind thoughts too, much appreciated. 🙂
      
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      - Ennle Madresan on April 5, 2019 at 9:22 pm said:
        
        Not clear what “rapid response/spontaneous response” is…
        
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        pvcann on April 5, 2019 at 10:07 pm said:
        
        That you’d only spend a max of twenty minutes writing your piece.
        
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        Ennle Madresan on April 5, 2019 at 10:09 pm said:
        
        I must be brain-dead…is this information available somewhere that I can read and get clearer about it? As I’ve never heard such a thing before.
        
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        pvcann on April 6, 2019 at 12:02 am said:
        
        No, you’re not brain dead, it’s just the welter of non-obvious info on the net. Well, it’s just that some sites spell it out. The old Word Press Daily prompt did, Go Dog Go Cafe are explicit on their Tuesday prompt. The others offer longer periods, thereby defining themselves that way.
        
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        Ennle Madresan on April 6, 2019 at 12:22 am said:
        
        Thanks for your time and attention, much appreciated.
        
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        pvcann on April 6, 2019 at 1:25 am said:
        
        No problem, if we can’t take time for people something is wrong 🙂
        
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        Ennle Madresan on April 6, 2019 at 1:32 am said:
        
        You’re a blessing.
        
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        pvcann on April 6, 2019 at 8:32 am said:
        
        Thank you, very kind 🙂
        
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        Ennle Madresan on April 6, 2019 at 1:20 pm said:
        
        Sincerely welcome 🙂
        
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